“He flexed his fingers”
this quotation to me is a bit tense because it is showing you that he is stretching out his Fingers getting ready to stab someone, so the reason why I think it is tense because it’s four tense words which are describing what he is doing before he goes to murder the family.
May 10, 2015 at 10:12 pm
Where is the alliteration here? Does it help to enhance meaning? Why?